hello lovelies! im an aspiring tf drawer and would appreciate any feedback or criticisms. how is this? i plan to make it a sequence but just want to make sure it looks ok first, thank you! 💕

12 10

24 34

10 0

31 33

25 30

9 0

26 30

14 0

19 10

26 30

23 32

16 0

27 33

9 30

23 31

15 10